this is a story about one woman who remind her life and what was her mistake her name is Karen Christentze .
started in Denmark with two brother one his best friend and the other her lover, she proposed to her lover got married with her because she want to be a baroness and travel to Africa, but it wasn't a best option as he didn't love her just he wanted her money, it was a wedding for business without love and arrange rings.
she travelled to Africa, she started to experiment new feelings and experiences with her husband, the Africans, and the farm, also her life was changed all the time and she falls in love with Berkeley Cole that she met in several times a long her life, he is adventurous, handsome and gentleman. but after some years she changed the mind, also she remembered that always she wants to travel to Australia thus she realize she had to life her live without love but travelling around the world.
Good imagination Angelica
ReplyDeleteHave a look and correct the following please:
remind her life = wrong word
started in Denmark = missing start of the sentence
two brother = number
she proposed to her lover got married = ...to get married
a best option = article
and arrange rings. = arrange (wrong form of the word)
to experiment new feelings = experiment = wrong word
she falls in love with Berkeley Cole = tense
met in several times = preposition
she realize = tense
she had to life her live = spelling